For reading we learn about Violet Walrond. she was the first female olympia, she died in december 17 1996. Violet Walrond was swimming for 15 years and 178 days. she was born in 27 February 1905 at Ackland she is a new zealand swimmer.
Heres my blog
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
For reading we learn about Violet Walrond. she was the first female olympia, she died in december 17 1996. Violet Walrond was swimming for 15 years and 178 days. she was born in 27 February 1905 at Ackland she is a new zealand swimmer.
Heres my blog
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Ethaniel,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work on Violet Walrond.
I like the facts that you have included about Violet like when she was born and what she was known for.
One thing to think about for next time is you could include a few more interesting facts about her. For example, why she stopped swimming.
Hope you have had a great weekend!
Fa'afeati,
Miss Lauder ☺️
Thank you Miss Lauder i will put more facts in my work. Fa'afetai lava i hope you have a great day, and what are you doing in your lockdown bubble im doing great in my one.
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